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Accuracy Clarity Conciseness and Coherence

The flow of electrical current can induce the migration of impurities or other defects through

the bulk of a solid. This process is called electro migration. In simple electro migration, the

force on the defect is thought to have two components. The first component is the force

created by direct interaction between the effective charge of the defect and the electric field

that drives the current. The second component, called the "wind force," is the force caused

by the scattering of electrons at the defect.

--J.A. Stroscio and D.M. Eigler, "Atomic and Molecular Manipulation with the Scanning

Tunneling Microscope," Science“””

What is accuracy and why is it important?

What is document Accuracy and why is it important?

What is technical accuracy and why is it important?

What is Clarity and why is it important?

What is Structural Clarity and why is it important ?

How can you promote structural clarity?

What is meant by Stylistic Clarity and why is it important?

What is meant by Contextual Clarity ?

• What prompts you to write?

•• What is your purpose?

•• Whose work precede has influenced yours?

•• What is the organizational and intellectual context of your problem?

You answer those questions in introductions and problem statements and in your citations

and other references.

What is ‘Conciseness’ and why is it important ?

How do you make your document more concise?

What is coherence and why is it important?

Have your blood cholesterol measured if you've never had it done. Finger-prick tests at

health fairs and other public places are generally fairly accurate, especially if they're offered

by a hospital or other reputable health group. When you know your"number," follow these

guidelines from the National Cholesterol Education Program:

·If your cholesterol is under 200 mg/dl, maintain a healthy lifestyle--including eating a low-fat

diet, getting regular exercise, maintaining a health body weight, and not smoking--and get

another test within five years.

Vitamins and minerals can be added to enrich (replace nutrients lost in processing) or fortify

(add nutrients not normally present) foods to improve their nutritional quality. Bread sand

cereals are usually enriched with some B vitamins and iron. Common examples of

fortification include the addition of vitamin D to milk, vitamin A to margarine, vitamin C to fruit

drinks, calcium to orange juice, and iodide to table salt.

--P. Insel and W. Roth, Core Concepts in Health

Coaxial vs. Fiber-Optic Cable: Comparative Cable-Length PerformancesFor a number

of critical performance characteristics, fiber-optic cable offers considerable advantages over

standard coaxial cables. The most obvious distinction between the two is the great

bandwidth-distance capacity of fibers. The high-frequency capacity of coaxial cables

decreases rapidly with increased length, but the bandwidth of a commercial fiber-optic

system will remain constant with length. A commercial fiber-optic system like that of Artel,

remains constant for a bandwidth over a distance of 4,000 ft, while three different sizes of

coaxial cable rapidly drop in less than half the distance.

--Artel Communications Corporation, "Fiber Optics in RGB Color Computer Graphics

Communications," Application Note CG-1

Weak:

Reducing drag in an aerospace vehicle is an important design consideration with financial

and operational consequences. Poorly designed rocket fuselage scan triple fuel and launch

costs. Drag increases stress on key joints. This proposed project will develop a model to

reduce aerodynamic drag on theRX100.

Improved:

Reducing drag in an aerospace vehicle is an important design consideration. For example,

poorly designed rocket fuselages can triple fuel and launch costs. Moreover, drag increases

stress on key joints. Therefore, this proposed project will develop a model to reduce

aerodynamic drag on the RX100.

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